Posted on October 30, 2008 by gautami tripathy
within the ruined castlebehind the colossal pillarssilhouettes on the wallscome alive in the middleof a dark moonless night
misted glass twist to a timelessdance of whorling thoughtsmaking one feel palpabletime lurks in its confines,standing to a sudden stillness
seeing an apparition comingout of the opposite wall, [...]
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Posted on October 29, 2008 by gautami tripathy
Telephone cables were stolen on Sunday night. Due to which 4000+ lines were affected. I was without net access for two days. It feels good to be back.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
damage had been so unyieldinga little girl not even in her teensmere colours painted on her lipsand so exacting a punishment-severe beatings, deep knife gashes on her body [...]
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Posted on October 25, 2008 by gautami tripathy
whoever said she has got great gift of the gab gave her a good back stab
you grab her words with your mightwhen moon looks askance at night
she burrow herself in deep shadowshiding herself from her eternal foes
all the while she spits fire from her lipsher cursing words are yours for keeps
afterwards she so wishes [...]
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Posted on October 23, 2008 by gautami tripathy
##Update on 24 October: I took Sweet Talking Guy’s advice and just placed the lines in the reverse order not making a single change anywhere. You can see that in the italics. It is no longer half a poem. I think, it works! Wot say? Feedback is solicited and would be much appreciated.
when we least [...]
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Posted on October 22, 2008 by gautami tripathy
AcheDifferenceSuffer
Why is it that we always dwell on the darkest side? It is easy to say Humanity has lost forever. Do we ever ask ourselves, why? And have we ever done anything to find it again? How many of us stop by and talk to a child who is poor and is working for his/her [...]
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Posted on October 19, 2008 by gautami tripathy
Here I offer two short verses, both different from my style!:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~you ask to follow me?never! ending thisunhealthy liason now
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in the abyss of darknesswhere black holes absorball that they can, he got lost-momentarily blinded by it
yet he senses it has to endnothing ever is never ending
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Posted on October 16, 2008 by gautami tripathy
why are you dressed as a tatterdemalionslyly slinking behind chrome-plated drainsescaping torrential rains hiding in the alleys,you who lived on the valley in a big villaare depleting it of memories, sacred to whom save you?
you sold the antiquated doors and now scour floorssweep the courtyards where even now ghostof tribal artifacts weep. who really aligned [...]
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Posted on October 15, 2008 by gautami tripathy
It is not because things are difficult that we do not dare; it is because we do not dare that they are difficult. ~Seneca
It is the fear of falling that prevents us from doing many a things. A child when he starts [...]
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Posted on October 11, 2008 by gautami tripathy
I tried rhyming after a long time, inluding internal rhymes and alliterations. A very very rough draft….
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~global gloom outshines goldto mere talks I am no longer soldstocks and bonds now are trash, no longer do they fetch any cashif you only recycled the coke cansyou might get some good returnsnevertheless sit tight, do not [...]
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Posted on October 11, 2008 by gautami tripathy
I tried rhyming after a long time, inluding internal rhymes and alliterations. A very very rough draft….
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~global gloom outshines goldto mere talks I am no longer soldstocks and bonds now are trash, no longer do they fetch any cashif you only recycled the coke cansyou might get some good returnsnevertheless sit tight, do not [...]
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